Reviews for Time
x.Insanely Serene.x chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
It's very confusing, but i know what you're trying to say. I really like the chaos and order part at the end_ My fave line was 'Time will last for eternity, and eternity only for a short time'Love ya lots,~*Serenity*~
aloofmonkey chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Very good poem! I like the way 'eternity' was woven into the poem.
Black Aura-Sama chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
It was confusing, but in a way that made you actually think about what was being read. It had a sort of flow to it that was a bit mesmerizing. The repitition was caught my attention. Great job.
Amethyst LaReine chapter 1 . 8/28/2000
um... yeah... whoa! confusing but good! gives u alot 2 think about! _*