|Reviews for Retrospect.|
| Silver Shadow chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
WOW! that was so cool. It reminds me of a couple kids i know. It gives out a great message!
| gone13213 chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
i don't usually post reviews (because i'm too lazy) but this one really blew me away. it's amazing how much talent you must have to be able to put such an awsoe story into rhyme and verse.
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
that last stanza is a heartstopper
| empty account chapter 1 . 3/28/2002
Wow! Great poem, wonderful message, makes me think.
| Desere chapter 1 . 3/24/2002
Very strong, though I found the style changed.. you went from every other line to every line to rhyme(can't spell right now tired). Not sure if it was done intentionally or not, just thought I'd point it out.
| Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 3/23/2002
Wow. Thats really deep. I like it a lot. Makes you think of all the kids out there that have family problems, and have been trained to hide it all. I know those problems all too well. Nice work, and thanks for reviewing my poem!
| hudsiyfiusnfsudi chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
sounds like one of my friendships. It died over two years. i like this poem, it has a lot of meaning. thanks for writting it.
| grey spirit chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
The last stanza is mind-boggling. An absolute gem that ties the poem together wonderfully. Keep writing.