okay so now i have read the entire thing. happy now?

hmm... it's a very peculiar idea. quite humorous at bits too but also sort of dull. (no offense) it just didn't really go anywhere and i get that that was your point... but still. i got kind of bored. sorry...

it's a cool idea though. what happened to the character that did nothing? shouldn't he have had an ending conversation with the Puppet Master?

well those are my thoughts...

lots of love showered with bruised diamonds and pink scars!

This is wonderful! I love the dialoge, the back adn fourths especially and the fact that you keep sticking the princess in even though we already know what she is doing. I am an avid fantasy and fairy tale fan but its good to see the stereotypes and conventions made fun of in a way that's not incredibly mean.

I absolutley loved it.

Incredible you have such a unique style that is so interesting and insightful. Keep writing. Its very interesting to read, I really enjoy it!

i'm so utterly confused! i don't get what's going on! you shouldn't of left it like that. you might want to go over it again... it's weird. *_*