hello, friend I saw you just reviewed my latest...to tell you the truth, I didn't think anyone would. hehe... _; wow, I can't believe this has been up for more than a year and I still haven't reviewed it. or any of your stuff for that matter...I'm going to review them all, don't worry. I don't really believe in rating poetry, though, so I don't think I can rate from 1-10. gomen...I really like your style, though! you captured a lot with a little in this poem. bye for now :)

That's a kewl poem. You did it during Math? Probably during a test rite? Well anyways, It was very good and it kinda aplied to me.

Great! Depressing though... but it still is great! I will give it a ten. good job Rali.

wow! this is sooooooooo good! i LOVE it! 12! 12!