Please continue! This is good!

AwWwe! I wuv it! Jake sounds gorgeous. Man, i need a guy like that

This was a cute chapter man! Chloe needs some happiness in her life and that dude seems nice. Update sooner next time alright? Hehehe!

Hey HEY Hey! It's me *Rihana.* I feel so special! :-D It's my name! This is fab by the way. Hope you continue to use *me* in your story. :-D

Like I said, you have issues if you don't think you write well. I mean, what's wrong with you. You have skills and that's a GREAT idea for a story. Keep it up

Awe that was SO sad man! And is that a real song or did you make it up? Either way this is starting off really cool and it's different, which I like. I get tired of the same old thing so this is refreshing! Keep it up!

Tom & Carol! MUST u steal my father's name? hmpf! ok ANYWAYS not a bad starter...u could go places w/ this...anyways later!