Reviews for The Betrayal
SomethingOriginal chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
I have but one word. WOW! I have been their before...but keep writing please...its good!
Jes21 chapter 1 . 4/15/2002
hmmmmmm... pretty cool, think I'll go check out some of your other stuff :)
Veggie-Trunks chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
Hey, I'm digging on this little poen here girl! U keep up the good work, k?
Usako chapter 1 . 3/22/2002
Really deep. I totally sympathyze with you. I've been there before. You did a great job expressing your emotions. You know you did it right, if you can make the reader really understand where you are coming from. I hope to read more from you soon!
Rainy6 chapter 1 . 3/17/2002
Kool -
Katsy-chan chapter 1 . 3/17/2002
thats great advice kels...hmmm..have i heard it b4? lmfao, im j/m.

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