|Reviews for Separated Siblings|
| Ski Aer chapter 2 . 3/17/2007
| Ms Urania chapter 1 . 4/3/2002
I like the way this has started and can't wait to see what happens next.
The only constructive criticism I can give is that it needs a little more description and it could be paced better, as I felt that the ending of the first chapter was a little rushed. Otherwise, this is pretty good!