Reviews for NOIR
Revo chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
Good piece, reminds me of 1984 in that it has the same premise.
corbin tressel chapter 3 . 4/11/2002
Not bad for a high school student, but certainly not up to Hubbard standards. I've read enough of those anthologies to tell you that the only people who get in submit for years and are already published in something else or they have an MFA in Creative Writing(which is the biggest waste of a time and a degree on the face of the planet.) Keep hammering at this until it really does read like a nior. Read some Raymond Chandler novels and study some of his wording and his style, because if that's what you're going for, you're a ways off. Your story is great, your vocabulary and your style are way off.
HaVIC chapter 1 . 3/21/2002
Mmmm, great piece of fiction here. I suggest for all who read this review read this story, it will not leave you dissapointed.