Reviews for seventeen years
Silence-endlessecho chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
That was so sad and beautiful. Very powerful!
Chord chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
A coma?

... beautiful poem.

~chord
werechick chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Melikies.
account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
ah-

i wish i had something intelligent to say. i really do
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
this poem feels like a symphony, and thats the only thing i can think of to say. i feel like crying too
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
hopkins makes me want to bite my fist.

indefinately this is also exsisting,
Jade6 chapter 1 . 5/9/2002
oh so sad... but powerful... truly touching...

I love the diversity of your poems... you cover so much and don't get stuck on the same topic...

I like this poem... it hits the heart... it is so real...
Spyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
Poignant as one can get.

Again, your pacing is exact,

purposeful and very drawing.

I knew it was her father

the stanza before you reveal

it... and I think that's what's

great about it.

as ever:

e