|Reviews for seventeen years|
| Silence-endlessecho chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
That was so sad and beautiful. Very powerful!
| Chord chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
... beautiful poem.
| werechick chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
i wish i had something intelligent to say. i really do
| Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
this poem feels like a symphony, and thats the only thing i can think of to say. i feel like crying too
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
hopkins makes me want to bite my fist.
indefinately this is also exsisting,
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 5/9/2002
oh so sad... but powerful... truly touching...
I love the diversity of your poems... you cover so much and don't get stuck on the same topic...
I like this poem... it hits the heart... it is so real...
| Spyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
Poignant as one can get.
Again, your pacing is exact,
purposeful and very drawing.
I knew it was her father
the stanza before you reveal
it... and I think that's what's
great about it.