Reviews for Dark Blue Twilight
AriaFitz chapter 1 . 3/17
Your story "Dark Blue Twilight" has the makings of something legendary a world waiting to be explored, characters aching to be seen, and a plot begging to unfold in stunning visuals!

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Guest chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
this fiction is interesting nd captivating, i want to read the next chapter.
Lady Eros chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Nice fic
Senga chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
good story

cool gravity whatchmacallits, very cool
Bloodreaver Alpha chapter 18 . 3/31/2003
WAI! WAI! Update soon!
00010101010101010 chapter 18 . 1/30/2003
PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this and it's really interesting! Very good and I love this so you MUST continue. Whether some people like it or not, it depends on YOU! Keepup the work and updating and please do update soon!
00010101010101010 chapter 17 . 1/30/2003
COOL! Does Fly look like Pasis and Deryke Figro? And gosh, you must be pretty happy to receive quite a few reviews in a few days as I read on...I saw that you haven't updated for a long time. Can you update soon?
00010101010101010 chapter 16 . 1/30/2003
Hmm...very interesting! Let me read on!
00010101010101010 chapter 15 . 1/30/2003
Cccoooooollll! I didn't get to read on earlier cuz I kept forgetting that there were more chaps .;; STupid me.
00010101010101010 chapter 14 . 1/25/2003
My gosh! She was arrested? Can't review long. Cool story!
00010101010101010 chapter 13 . 1/25/2003
Whoa! Oh and... is this a mistake? Like you said she stayed there for four years then you changed it to five years.
00010101010101010 chapter 12 . 1/25/2003
Hm...I sense danger there...And I didn't have toi leave! Yay! Let me continue!
00010101010101010 chapter 11 . 1/25/2003
Cool fight! And ooh! They're off somewhere! I can't wait! Unfortunately, I must leave. *sob* I LOVE this story! This is one of my fav. Anime/Manga original fics! The other's Labyrinth of War. REad it! You both rival by being the best!
00010101010101010 chapter 10 . 1/25/2003
Whoa! I bet finding a warehouse fulla black giants woulda been scary!
00010101010101010 chapter 9 . 1/25/2003
Hmm...something happened...but what? Wow! Great job! Please continue!
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