|Reviews for Pandora's Box
| Sunny chapter 4 . 7/18/2009
I didn't quiet understand what was happening here, but that might just whenever there was an apostraphe this thing ("âœ") would show up and I couldn't read some of it.
The first part is wonderful, however. It really gives the story an eerie,haunted type of mood.
| sine chapter 4 . 6/20/2004
This story is beautifully done- why did you stop? where is part five?
I love the way the time jumps back and forth so that brandy and zap's past together is slowly revealed. your slash is mild, and tasteful. good job!
| Fighting It chapter 4 . 8/18/2003
Whoa...totally awesome and creepy and original. This is really excellent. Sequal perhaps? I wish it was longer. Other than that...totally good. I think i said that already. Whatever. Most excellant...but it needs to be longer!
| Edana chapter 4 . 8/13/2003
Part 5 is the end? Is this the end? I thought it was only part 4. Anyway, it was an enjoyable tale and I really think you could stretch it out just a little and change the order of events and it would be even better. But I loved the characters and the angst and the setting and plot and everything. Box is great too, the evil thing. It was strange though, that you put the reunion in the last chapter and ended this chap with angst. Even though I know what happens, it still ends in a depressing way. But I liked it a lot _
| Edana chapter 3 . 8/13/2003
This is a really interesting story. You have a lot of clever and original ideas and I love the way you created the setting without going overboard. Like by refering to 'Zero' and having Casts and Norts and the plot drew me in too. I got a little confused with the names and such, and also with the way the scenes aren't in chronological order. I know it would make more sense if I paid attention to the dates, but personally I think that if you rewrote this fic and changed the order, it would get a lot more attention!
| Val Mora chapter 1 . 4/3/2003
I like what you've got, but I have no idea what's happening. I realize there's a flashback in here, but I can't keep the characters straight - "who is where with whom in the what now?" is sort of my reaction to it all, because I don't get it.
It would be better if I had some idea what was going on.