Reviews for Timara - Chapter 1: Ulfil
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
I wonder how old Timara is. When she asked if her brother is fine, she seemed young, but shouting that he's dead makes her seem older. Maybe you could describe the charecters more (or maybe you were going to do that in a later chapter?)
Princess Of Quake chapter 1 . 3/15/2001
No hyvältä näyttää! _ Jatka vaan, täällä on ainakin yx lukija!
Saudukar chapter 1 . 2/28/2001
Liked it. Is there more?
Fyah Rain chapter 1 . 12/12/2000
This looks like an interesting plot line. You should definitely fix some of those spelling and grammatical errors, though.
Sandiya chapter 1 . 9/27/2000
That was moving _ I rarely read fantasy, but I liked the title . Awesome description, especially "misted with tears" and "howling snowstorm" I hope you come out with the next part soon, you can't leave me at this part! *grins* K, sayonara!