|Reviews for Elves|
| Cowgurl4God chapter 17 . 12/22/2004
I may have said that this story was and still is funny, but I love the action in it so you've got to write more. PLEASE!
| Cowgurl4God chapter 15 . 12/22/2004
Man! You must love converting me into giggles. I love elves and such but never have I read such a good story of romance and humor. I'm sorry if that insults you but I can rarely ever hold my laughter in where ever romance is in play and expesecially if the guy and girl are both sarcastic.
| Kitto chapter 17 . 7/31/2003
WHO! plot movement! AND AN UPDATE!*does lil happy dance* yeah, sorry about bitting ur head off and crap, i just get very anxious when there's a cliffhanger, kinda, at the end of a chap. and the author seems to disapper. anywhoo, loved the way the story's headed can't wait for next chap!
| J CAE chapter 2 . 7/31/2003
Oh good! The plot's original. Keep it up!
| Dana chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
damn you...ur too good of a writer *glares* :-) Just kidding...*still glares* NO really..lol...now, like a million more chapters...arg.
| Leah the Great chapter 16 . 1/13/2003
yes, I know, my other alternate anding was beautiful, wasn't it? and I know perfectly well how to update!
| raili chapter 16 . 12/29/2002
ooooooooooo wow! ur ficcy is is the best original I've ever red! puuuuuuleeeeeease update sooooooon!
| Hi my name is chloe chapter 1 . 12/15/2002
hi mari! i was supposed to be doing my homework and was running out of distractions when I remembered that i started reading this a while ago and if i started it again now i wouldn't have to face geometry homework. good job! (not that i finished) i kind of got confused by your fight scene though. i always get confused by fight scenes, so thats probably not your fault. but its late so i'm going to have to stop this now and start my math. bye!
| Emily chapter 16 . 12/4/2002
Write more. now. who will hikari choose? poor lien if she chooses kanada, poor kanada if she chooses lien. personally i think you should make it all sad and crap and have hikari love kanada u know but choose lien because she has a kid with him and stuff and yeah kinda like in pearl harbor you know? hey you could even have lien die again this time for good and then have kanada and hikari get married and raise the little kid i forget her name. I still demand a chapter dedicated to ME for my VERY late birthday special. Sheesh its taken you ages. Well um thats it for now.
| Kitto chapter 16 . 12/3/2002
*is curently hiding under a blaket* HOLY CRAP WEASELS(where the hell did that come!)why?..how? wait, u said how. but WHY? why do i feel something not so nice is in the future. i mean evil dudes just don't bring back their worst enemy's family just for the heck of it!...i had to much suger
| Leah the Tired chapter 15 . 12/1/2002
too tired to reread your story and review. consider alternate ending. good job. Im sure it is spectaculr. goodnight.
| Katy chapter 1 . 11/7/2002
Maressa you better update when you come out of your growndedness!OK?
PS I hope i spelled growndedness right! _
| Holly chapter 15 . 11/2/2002
Hey Mari, guess what, you are healed, write more "DAMN IT"
| chouchou chapter 14 . 9/21/2002
Ooo...fluff! So sugoi and kawaii! Finally, the slightly *dense* Hikari has realized her feeligns for Kanada! *pets his head* More! Please...
| EMILY chapter 14 . 9/21/2002
OK HERE'S YOUR STUPID REVIEW! I LOVE THE CHAPTER, I LOVE KANADA, I WANT TO MARRY KANADA, KILL HIKARA, SO ON SO ON... NOW SEND ME THE NEXT CHAPTER!