I loved it I want it to be amovie and it would be so cool. You are even better then some people with actual books, please write a second it was great!

WHOA, that was the BEST story I have ever read. I was absolutely hooked on it! I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very emotional story. I laughed and cried (which doesn't happen a lot). I wish I could write like you. Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed reading it.
signed,
Katie

that story is awesome! you should write a sequel! i cant think of any criticism at all for it..strange thing for me,lol.

sry i just relized this but shouldn't the epilouge be the last chapter and then the epilauge would be what happens after the last chapter as in:
epilouge:
'after essylit's death defying return she and calvan got married and had two sweet children and everyone lived happily ever after'...except longer than that...and then if you do a series then you start off from the end of the epilouge...sry if you don't want to write ANOTHER epilouge for this story that just caught my eye after reading this story a few times...great story! please make a series!please?purty pwease?purty pwease with a few cherries on top?

hey!this is a REALLY good story!i would REALLY like it if you could put up a secuil(can't spell)or somehting and if you do could you PLEASE start from the ending of essylit chronicles?i for some reason don't like it whenever people start it like 10 years later because i just feel as if i missed something in the story because there is ususally new charecters and the old charecters have been for a long time since about my this story is so good!_ this is the 3rd time i have read it!

This story is awesome. I like it. Hope to read more of your stuff.

Aw! That was very sweet. Excellent job, m'gal! You're awesome, Gel. Wonderfully awesome. I love your stories! Your characters are so loveable. I look forward to what you come up with in the future! I know they'll only get better from here.

aw... that was wonderful :D
*applauds*

WHA!
It's OVER!
*cries*
And I liked it so MUCH!
*still crying*
It was such a great story with such great characters... They shall be missed!
*sniff sniff*

So cute! I'm sad it's over, but it was a really good ending and Kai was so cute too! Well I g2g. Ja ne!

Not a bad little story. I got a kick out of it. You dont' see a sarcastic heroine very often these days. They are usually Sailor Moon clones. My only complaint was the formating mess in ch 4 where all the Html tags were showing, other than that this was a great story! I hope to see more from you as soon as possible.

G-chan! I am absolutely in love with it! I'm so happy you updated! I love this so incredibly much! GAH! *clings*

LA LA LA LA LA... Happy ending, happy ending...
I suppose it's time for the overall comment on your wonderful, hilarious, so inspirational story - and that was just it. _ If you don't get this published, dear Gelasia, you can look forward to constant attacks by rabid chipmunks and cannibalistic strawberries!
Well, I guess this is sayonara, ne? Unless you plan to write another story, which of course I will review! I'm gonna miss these characters though!
SAYONARA!

WHA! That can't be the end of the chapter... Meanie.
Anywho... Loved "mother" earth... Eh heh heh... That was great! -

Ok, Gel. Here's my review:
Hurry up and give us the last chapter! And it BETTER be good. _;
Seriously, though. You're such an awesome writer. Keep it up. I look forward to seeing you published someday.