yay...i think your story is great! Great naration that makes me want to know more about the boys and what will happen. *nod head* yeah, I want to know more about the mysterious and aloof gavin, pretty please _
update soon...your story looks really promising .
umm...your inn reminds me of the place I stayed while on a short vacation in laguna beach...very homely and ran by a family, but no pretty, shy boy like brody...although there was an obnoxious girl like sybil e_e...geh, im babbling now...update soon!

Finally! _ I've been waiting for this since you discontinued The Brody Story. I love the start. It's really good. you can tell your writing style has improved a lot since TBS. Please add more soon!

P.S. Could you possibly think about the Rueben/Corey thing? They were my faves! :)

haven't been on for a long time, but anyway...

actually I prefered the old concept/setting/whatever (;;), but this one's nice, too

and as fas as I can tell your writing skills are even better than before

Hey! Great of what i've so far read (didn't finish yet ..

I have to agree with the rest of the reviewers, Emi. This story shows huge improvement in characterization. Whether it's from better pre-writing planning or just experience, keep it up! You're developing a very comfortable style to your writing. Also:

Dude, R U gonna write some hot $EX scenes?

Just kidding. Love ya, cutie. Don't ever stop writing.

Ooooh, I like this one sooo much better, I don't know why, but it seems like you are developin gthe characters more...oh well please post more soon! :)

Wow, Emi-chan. You've really improved. Your characterization is really working here and I have a much easier time visualizing both Brody and Gavin. I also like how Brody is more assertive here and less skittish, though he still does have his doubts. That's what makes him a more believable character. And Gavin...the way he constantly appears wherever Brody is is so cute! I also love how you added in the kitty. Kitties make everything better. The setting is also much clearer, which shows that you have managed to conquer the one flaw that I have yet to overcome. The ability to write a convincing setting. Three cheers! You must write more. 'Cause if you don't, I'll stop writing. _~ j/k

Yay :) I'd put you on my fav's but you already are :P good to see another story with Brody and Gavin :) Looking forward to more!

Laura

YES! Finally, Brody is BACK! *giggles* The Frankie thing was funny...Sybil is such

a dork sometimes...she's cool! Anyways, can't wait til you update! Got to go yell at

Miya for not telling me about this being up...wonder if I can get her to make me a Brody

plushie... -

Hey! I love this story so far. It's really cute! I love Brody. He's awesome! Keep it up!

YAY! MUCH better to read then The Brody Story. Me likes! Me likes!

yaaaay! this is going to be awesome, i can tell! Trisquit is so sweet...i love it!

Oh my, Gavin is scary! It's like, everywhere you go, he's just... there. Like from a cheesy horror film. Ah! Keep away! Except, this isn't cheesy and... it's not a horror... is it? I am thinking that you should have chapter two in Gavin pov that way, we get equalness in the po-viewness. Yes. And Sybil IS crazy, and Brody's cat is just plain cute. Yes, I wub this greatly! Must. Read. More.

Oh my, Gavin is scary! It's like, everywhere you go, he's just... there. Like from a cheesy horror film. Ah! Keep away! Except, this isn't cheesy and... it's not a horror... is it? I am thinking that you should have chapter two in Gavin pov that way, we get equalness in the po-viewness. Yes. And Sybil IS crazy, and Brody's cat is just plain cute. Yes, I wub this greatly! Must. Read. More.

ooooo, Emiko-Chaaaaan! it's so GOOD! i mean, love the ther one, but i LOOV this one (notice the 2 'o's and no 'e?' mega-differant)!

lovies

Kay-chan