Dark, creepy, and I'm not sure if I have fully understood it. And yet it possesses a strange harmony, a dark melody that binds the words together.

Believe it or not, I liked it.

I like this, even though I'm gonna need to read it a few more times to actually get it . . .oh, my one little brain cell's getting over-heated. Is this inspired by Johnny The Homicidal Maniac? 'Cuz that's one of the funniest, and yet most meaningful, comic I've ever read, in that 'Should I Be Laughing At This?' kind of way.

Now if we knew what it was about. *nites nails* I NEED to know!

Hmmmm... I'll flex my thinking muscles for a second, and say that maybe this could be a fanfiction poem of "Johnny the Homicidal Maniac"? I dunno, the "Johnny", and "Dead People" parts have a lot to do with the comic books. Good poem!

-Razor

Nice poem, I'm gonna take a shot at who its about- John Lennon/the Beatles? It has lots of references to them either way. Very good.

Has a lot of reason. I like it, kinda creepy though. I dunno if Paul is dead either. Keep on writing!