Reviews for Love Twice
Sairah Bashir chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
I really liked this one, it sorta reminds me of a very close guy friend of mine that I seem to have fallen for... It's different, of course, but he comes to mind when I read it. Very well written and interesting concept!
dramamonkey chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
this is such a nice poem! keep writing
aurias chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
I had to laugh! I thought of my very first bf when I read this. Not that I did what the poem said, but rather what he did! I am actually smiling at the memory now! Godd work.
Tiffany Kremer chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
Just a real quick question...was this about a teacher? I wasn't real sure but that is what popped into my head after you wrote 'Days after I went into your class'.

Anyway, wonderful poem. It flowed very smoothly, no real big stop or blemishes. I thought you did a very nice job. It has a lot of feeling and the rhyiming is very nice.
Robs chapter 1 . 3/29/2002
Lou, that was really pretty. Is it based on real events or something you just wrote to write? If real, I have to know, who?