Reviews for Follow Me
laerai chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
The end line was awesome. Enticing and provoking her to think of it. The third stanza has so many possibilities. I see that it could have another side meaning not just of the possibility of love, but more of the fate of our entire world. I also like the fact that the narrator is an angel. Is she another angel? Probably not. Or a mortal he is waiting for? More likely. So he can offer her things that no mortal can. Will her death join them? Heaven or Hell? I'm about to go off on a tangent, so I'll leave it here.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
oo, pretty and interesting, i like this one, its like a lil taste of whats to come, i love that...anywayz, its pretty well written, i love the first two stanzas and then it seems to fade a bit from there, not a strong ending, but i still like this a lot, nicely done
leobaby chapter 1 . 3/31/2002
this is deep, good job! u've captured true feeling!