Reviews for Mankind's birth
unexpected source chapter 1 . 3/31/2002
oooooooooooohh.

thats a very good poem.

sometimes it makes me think of william carlos williams, or even mina loy- which is sweet.

i like it as a whole, after you read it you think back and you can view it all at once, and it paints a picture. what a grand picture it is.
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
This is EXCELLENT! Jeez the images were great, and the rhythm and rhyme were absolutely flawless. Poetic and yet still comprehensible to those of us (like me) who are less poetic. *laughs* Your rhyme scheme, as I believe I've mentioned before in a different poem, is great. That's just a matter of opinion, but hey, isn't that what reviewing is about! I love this, I don't know what else to say. :) Wonderful, WONDERFUL work. Keep writing! MJ