Reviews for Fire and Ice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was so awesome, plz don't give up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! its really really good! but alex is so mean to caireatha! i mean, i know with his whole past and stuff he's meant to be like that but he's just so...so...slack to her! oh well, i loved your story nonetheless and i hope that alex realized who she is soon and.. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I can't wait until you update! *Shale* |
![]() ![]() I am so glad u updated! This is an interesting story and i can't wait to read more! Plz update soon! _! |
![]() ![]() Your story is awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Good story. I like it alot. Overall it has been tremendously enjoyable and entertaining and I'mn terribly curious to find out what else happens. It just irks me sometimes whenever Alexander says 'you're nothing but a slave' and blah blah blah, cuz it's like; HEY! SHE'S THE PRINCESS, THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Heh... yeah, a whack upside the head would help too. ) Anyway, I guess its just frustration, not as if there is anything wrong with your writing or story. Good work! Update soon! -Twi |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! the whole part about the demons is pretty intriguing- between that and the rebellion, it sounds like Alex is going to have some trouble. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aye - cliffhanger! How I hate them! Anyways, great chapter here. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i luv your stpry. The only suggestion i have 4 u is t update more and to put more feeling into the characters and make their emotions run deeper. It might also be a good idea to show caireatha's emotional thoughts as you do with alex. update soon! ( would u b intrested in being a beta reader? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, as always! |
![]() ![]() Ahh! You last updated in 2002! WRITE MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah...poor Caireatha! Mean prince...Update son! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Caireatha, Alexander is being esecially cruel. I was thinking the romance woould be between the two of them, but maybe I was wrong :( Maybe she'll get back with her old flame, the rebel leader. I don't know. Good chapter, as always, and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a really good story!:) Please write some more! |