Reviews for Fire and Ice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, you write beautifully, and please do continue. I love you! -T |
![]() ![]() Um... when are you going to update? Hopefully soon... I love this story and can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...I really don't think he is going to tell Jared why she was in no position to fight. Unless his conscience REALLY disturbs him. So who exactly is this demon lord? How badly is Alex going to slaughter them for the death of Sylvia? This story is really very intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got to update soon! Please? |
![]() ![]() aerial sprite, I know it's been nearly 3 years since you updated, but I know myself and many others would love it if you took time to revisit this story and finish it. It sets itself apart with well-developed characters, a good plotline, and great detail. You may be busy or lost interest in writing this particular story, but please take time to write on this one again! It's so very well done! It would be even better completed :)... |
![]() ![]() Wow. You haven't updated for such a long time, but I still have a teeny hope that you will. This story is really good! I hope to read more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon it's been 3 years! i wish u luck on your writing! your story is awsome A Dark White Rose |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my. i somehow have a feeling that Jared is going to die. i HOPE not! please? lol, updates? |
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![]() ![]() please update! i know its been a long time, but you know us reviewers will be happy to help with writer's block. this story is fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story so far, though, a few sentences need to be revised. On the other hand, like the moderate pace of the plot that's building up & characters involved. Hope to read more. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more. I love your story. |
![]() ![]() Great story...but two years and no update. But then again you've previously posted over the course of two years, so maybe you might still work on this story?I hope so cause its great! I'm so glad Alexander found out that Caireatha was innocent though i hope he feels guilty! I was shocked when he let her be treated badly, though i could understand soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i see you haven't updated your fic for a very long time.. cna you please update this your story is good. and it was written well. and i like the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! Oh no...you haven't updated this story in a very long time I see. And just at the good part! This story is amazing...gorgeous in the literary sense. The imagery, emotions - I really do feel myself tearing up and miserable at Carieatha's torment. I mean... she believes he killed her family, and yet she loves him...he believed her a traitor, let her suffer pain and...*shivers* needles, and she saved his life by throwing the knife at the assassin. Wherever she is, I'm willing to bet she's in more emotional than physical pain, which is something knowing all that she's gone through, because I feel the physical pain she has as well. That is something only a talented writer can pull off, and you have talent dripping in every word you write. *sighs* I know that after two years, it's unlikely you'll update this story here, but you've got the reviews to back you - this story is amazing, and I am YEARNING to read more of it! PLEASE update it...truly. ~Cheers to a most successful writer~ |