Reviews for Untitled 2
pointythings chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
These are really cool! I like haikus because they're a cool way to express something with not that many words. I love the last lines of both of them.
MMonewhiteeye chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
PRetty cool.
Savak chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
O... spiffy-cool! You know, I've never been the haiku type myself, but I have respect for anyone who can write one properly... and you've got two!
KharmaSlut chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
Very very nice, when haikus are good, damn they're good. :)
MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Really good, and well worded.
Thisend chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
Vewy Vewy nicely witten... I weally wike dis wone...
White Arab chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
Wow. that sure hit it right. thats the basics. It's just so abrupt. am I making any sense? This is exactly it. This is what I'm tring to say in everything I write, and you've gone and in several words just described everthing. Wow. awesome. incredable.
Mr. Derp 6 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Mr. Derp does not enjoy this too much, but it is not underpy, but it is not derpy.
BonBon 10 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Marco chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I like it.
netshark chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Very true, and very well-written. You have poetic talent, let me tell you that.