Reviews for compassion
Gothic Renegade chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
First of all thanks a bunch for Reviewing Death's Choice. I like to return the favor...see what my readers are writing. heeheehee :) This sounded really cool and was written very nicely. I remembered this one time I was taking a short cut through a cemetary and saw, probably a crow..some black colored bird..probably a crow..I duno anyway it was flying around and then landed on a headstone and started pecking at it reminded me of that Brandon Lee
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Short, but very thought provoking. Quite good. I prefer short poems to long ones anyway. I think that they get there point across more clearly..Less fluff surrounding the message.
broken wings241 chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Very morbid... I like it!
TigerRAA chapter 1 . 5/22/2002
Poor people.
alex4 chapter 1 . 4/12/2002
not bad. I like the last line best.

jewls13 chapter 1 . 4/12/2002
good. I think you can expand on this, but the simplicity is refreshing. seemingly random thoughts and ideas, but they are related. nice work