Reviews for First One Down
The Mushroom Fairy chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I read this and though my perception was different at the beginning of the poem, by the end I had visualized a caterpillar wrapping itself up safely inside of a cacoon. Can't wait to see what happens when she becomes a butterfly!
Yoake Hajime chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
Kirei...Beautiful work.
the little death chapter 1 . 4/20/2002
Wow. you must be me because you write my thoughts like you are thinking them.
Zels chapter 1 . 4/6/2002
That's a really nice poem, Shaddy. It's kinda sad, ne? Write another soon. Yeah, the piccy is really pretty too.