This is a great piece of work. I hope you'll get the next act up soon.
One thing that makes this so great is the fact that the stepfamily is not evil. They are very good. Also, Estela's not a wimp like most Cinderellas. Keep up the good work!

I really like your story Tess, it is nothing like any Cinderella story I have read! You have a very good ideas and you know how to write them down. I can't wait to read the rest, keep writing!