| Reviews for Flowers for Ophelia Suite for the Sweet |
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  Edouard du Rent chapter 1 . 4/25/2017 It's not off to a good start so far. When writing a story, you don't start off with a laundry list of their backgrounds and whatnot. I, and most people in the world, would not bother reading an information dump at the beginning of the book. Make it more subtle by inserting the details and their backgrounds through the chapters. |
 Emerald Dragon77 chapter 26 . 5/17/2011 I liked this story a lot. Some of the plot/themes clearly mirrored Queer As Folk, but there were enough differences and you still certainly made the story your own. Thanks for the read |
| lunasea chapter 7 . 1/9/2010 i thought id mention that its slightly confusing that tristan starts out with blue hair but all of a sudden its blonde?...if he changed it, it would have been nice to know :] |
| vlight chapter 24 . 6/15/2009 I cannot understand how Cori sucked and fucked Tristan at the same time... maybe I read it wrong? |
| beloved18 chapter 3 . 1/23/2007 purple monkeys ! |
| beloved18 chapter 1 . 1/23/2007 we |
| Fei chapter 14 . 8/4/2006 I'm loving this, I've got my baby daughter in my lap so kinda hard to review, just wanted to point out in this chapter you said " first of all, I'm sixteen..." but a few chapters back he was 17? Anyway, this is so cute, Cory must be great at languages, I've been with my boy for 2.5 years and I still can't speak his first language, and Cory learnt Chinese in a year. Must read more... |
| Prisoner-11 chapter 26 . 5/17/2006 That was really sweet... |
| Green Eyed Pixie chapter 26 . 4/26/2006 I loved this story so much! Tristan is so adorable and Cori is so sweet. And yay Jeremy and Darren love each other! I was so hoping for that to happen. I loved the use of the flowers as names for the chapters too, very cool. There isn't alot to say really, apart from i just really loved this story, and appreciate you writing it vair vair much. D |
| Storm December chapter 26 . 4/19/2006 I think it's a wonderful story and I love it! |
| jessica chapter 1 . 12/29/2005 aww... Triscut is so cute! I can tell this is going to be a great story. Very well written from the get go. |
| TUS chapter 12 . 10/29/2005 oh, dammit. it's like 7 in the morning and my eyes are starting to make the computer screen twitch... ooh...(why do i suck at writing reviews? sorry)..cute. i liked the charles weaver thing (that was in this story, right? hope so, otherwise i'll feel like an idiot) so...i'm going to try to finish this before people wake up but i doubt it'll happen, so maybe (and hopefully) i'll get around to finishing this tomorrow night. yay |
| gothic-writer-13 chapter 26 . 10/13/2005 another story well done! D hehehe, you like to write about englishmen a lot apparently... not that I mind ;) |
| pneumothorax chapter 5 . 7/11/2005 Quite a chase in Nicholas from the start of the scene as angry, to finally happy for him/OK about it. |
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 7/8/2005 The initial opening was dull, but as the chapter progressed, it got better. I like it. |