Reviews for Flowers for Ophelia Suite for the Sweet |
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![]() ![]() Righty girl, you know who i am, so you know what i demand! MORE MORE GIVE ME MORE, MORE MORE, I WANT MORE! LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA. you know how the song goes. Keep up the good work and keep up the chapters, i am addicted! |
![]() ![]() Yay! More chapters. That's goood. No one updates anymore, but I'm glad you did because I like this story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() makes sense now...he's unlisted had me worried for a minute |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Clackin' together and rollin' around like nobody's business baby.” Yeah, I love you just for that one line. The story is still really sweet and great! Put out more now! The only recommendation besides that that I really have is how suddenly the exposition is given, and I would recommend trying to fit it into the story better. It's all interesting, but could be worked in better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm ::looks around nervously:: Can I review yet? Yes, oh goody! I luv this story! So sweet! (uh, no pun intended) Its really cute and I hope that Cori can accept Tristan, age and all hehe Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Ahh, just the fluff I was looking for. Really nicely done with good expression of Cori and Tristan's feelings. And a lovely happy image to end on. . Brilliant stuff! |
![]() ![]() wow great yay, more please soon. |
![]() ![]() I love your story. Another one of these originals I've come to enjoy. I hope you continue this story. I'd like to know what happens and I hope Tristan doesn't get into TOO much trouble. ; Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Can't you keep characters outta the bedroom for an entire fic? Sorry-;-it's really well written, and if anybody didn't notice: BM just totally foreshadowed what happens in the end to Si in 'London Rain' by using Tristie's story! I could have done without the last bit of the third chappie-ooh, but Cori's reaction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, loving it...more please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are so addorable! More soon... I hope that they don't get caught for a while, if at all, the idea of the secret, behind everyone's back romance is just so sweeeeet... |
![]() ![]() yay! but dont let Tristans age get in the way of his and Cori's relationship please, i think they would be a very very very cute and cheeky couple and once again well done deary |
![]() ![]() that was really sweet, for a guy and a straight one at that, i found that really sweet, odd huh, write more if you can and soon |
![]() ![]() ahhhhhh more, PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() oh come you cant leave it at two chapters, thats not fair, i want more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz,. i love the name Cory and Tristan, very cool gorl, keep it up thnx |