|Reviews for Cascades, Or So It Feels Like|
| Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 4/21/2002
Another great twisted, great, magnificient poem! As always when I read your poems, I'm flabbergasted. It does kind of sound like a love poem. The expression that you are able to use with an relative 'he' is dealt with in such a careful, passionate manner.
Have you ever tried writing with a relative 'she'?
| Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
My borders expatiate until
they touch the retreating armies of the horizon
and I know,
somewhere, among the masses of red and gold,
he, a little patch of darkness,
is still wearing his shadow badges.
My God, that is wonderful! God, I wish I could write like that. You are so talented. I love this!
| becca3 chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
ooo... very nice. i think i'm going to read it agian! i like your poetry a lot by the way.