|Reviews for if then i am his observer (a stranger)|
| Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 4/21/2002
Truly magnificient. I don't see how a person can actually write so well! I can't even remotely come close to your level. You certainly have great talent in your hands. I'm sure everyone who reads your poems/stories would agree with me. I have to say, however, this is not the way I thought you would describe this person. I esp. liked IV's use of words. Keep it up! :)
| Anukis chapter 1 . 4/13/2002
this is excellant. i wish i could write like this. I esp like V about the palms and how he has never seen them b/f. Keep it up! You'll be famous!
| Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
God, I love these! Especially III. The descriptive words lend so much to the overall poem(poems, I mean -). And you're welcome :). You're so talented!
| becca3 chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
wow... i like them! nice job!