|Reviews for The Eye of the Phoenix|
| Ariax chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
i really really like this... its great that the phoenix is male, iv read heaps of stories about phoenix, even written some, and all of them were female. the whole idea in this story is really very good. well done. if there is anymore to read afterwards, i would really like to read it.
| Zaira O'Bryan chapter 2 . 9/28/2002
Great, great, and wonderfully excellent. Two thumbs up! Wonderful second chapter... just add another one sometime.
| Zaira O'Bryan chapter 1 . 9/28/2002
You've got a great beginning going on, and I can't wait to read more.
| MsgBoardHobo chapter 1 . 5/7/2002
out of ten stars u get...
Beggining: didnt even wanna read it cuz of summary, but i gave it a shot.
Ending: unfinished, so far ending to chapters ok...
Plot: no description, barely any actualy plot line, nice imagination though
Creativity: Uh... no. Mythical birds saving the world need a backup story.
nuthin backin up this firebird.
Suggestions: Try being more descriptive tell us hair color, background, a/n's, i
feel no need to get involved witht eh characters now, they mean nothing.