Reviews for Do You See Me? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I love that poem and how it flows like a story. Keep up the awesome work _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good. very honest. id like to see alot more poems written by you (new ones not the ones u already wrote which were good by the way) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad. I really can sympathise with this feeling. I love the line, 'But I'm afraid it would lose it's magic' because that's how it often feels. We don't want the magic to die becuase we just want this unexplained feeling to last forever. This is really well written and I think you've expressed your feelings well. I hope he does see you. Thank you for writing this and congratulations on your finished result. |
![]() ![]() I've been trying to write poetry for years, and I'd be proud if I wrote this _~. Keep writing, you definately have talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem was very beautiful and i am most definately sure whoever you wrote this about will love it too. Keep writing. You are very talented. Simon |