Reviews for Princess Uncommon
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 3 . 3/29/2005
This is good. it seems like this one wuxia I wrote and never posted. I seriously enjoy it and hope you continue to add on to this. It seems more along the lines of "Kendo", a kabuki type story I'm writing on. As you can tell I'm a big fan of all things Asian.-Yin
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 2 . 3/29/2005
This is good- really good- but the accents aren't showin' up too good, so you should just post the names in english characters. Other than that, it's all good, and even with that, it's still good.-Yin
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Nice. The stuff at the bottom helps alot. But you delve deep into the history, which is great. I was wondering- not to be all cliche but I tried to write a wuxia and I was wondering if you could check it out and give some serious feedback cause this is my first stab at the genre. I'd really appreciate it and I will continue to read this story either way.-Yin
Shaolin chapter 3 . 5/23/2003
this is a really good story. u gotta gett the next chapter out soon cause i wanna read it.
Robs chapter 3 . 1/19/2003
It reminds me of that Disney movie a little. With that dragon played by Eddie Murphy. I realized I stopped reading this and decided to tell you to finish it or die! Toodles.
Robs chapter 1 . 7/30/2002
Alot of information...I am trying to soak it all up. I get where you are going and basics, but the entire dynasty part is confusing to me. It is prolly just me being slow, but I'll have to read it several times to get it down completely.
Robs chapter 2 . 4/14/2002
Way to go Misty! That is the best writing you have ever written that I have read! Is this the one you were talking about in Spanish class? Anyway, I love this. Your descriptions and information were incredibly detailed, and not confusing in the least like most that try to include different cultures in their writing. Thank you for the vocab at the end of Chapter Two too. It helped me seeing as I don't speak Chinese. Unless, that was Cantonese. I still can't speak that, but I was just saying. Now I am rambling, but the main point is I was really REALLY impressed with this. I like it very much, and can't wait to read more. Check out my new poems I posted too please. After all, I am writing you a pretty nice review here. You deserve it though. I found absolutely no criticism to give except please go into the description of the courtyard, library, and the entire floorplan of her house. If you did this we could feel like we are walking through the house with her, and that would make this like the ultimate writing. Again, kudos on a job WELL done. Post more soon please!
Untold Star chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
Good story so far. Keep writing!