|Reviews for if then i am only his effect (and he the cause)|
| Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 4/21/2002
Great feel to the poem. Rather deeply settled in one's heart/mind. (I'm not sure whether that was the intention or not.) Your language is very moving.
| Yui chapter 1 . 4/17/2002
My my my...you are an odd one. I like them though. I don't know why but I'm starting to love these twisted little poems you write. And the lats one, that's about HIM isn't it? You're right...it does sound like a love poem. Keep writing!
| NewkirksHeroes doing this from school can't sign in chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
Again...you are such a wonderful author :) I love this...just, your ability to see people in all these ways, and turn it into words! God, I'm jealous :). Your poetry is always a joy to read
| Anukis chapter 1 . 4/13/2002
OMG. this is undescibingly beutiful...I think I'm gonna go sit in a cornor now...