Reviews for la pluie
Ysabell47 chapter 1 . 9/3/2002
thats ever so lovely...i have felt the same thing, and miss winter in summer.. i love the simplcity and grandeur of the line 'I feel beautiful', because it returns the true meaning of beauty (hijacked shamelessly in this day and age) to the word. I just love rain i'm afraid, so i ramble :P this is very nice.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2002
beautiful, I love your poems. I'm in the process of reading all your stuff, did I mention I love your poems
sweetspontaneous chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
yes...what is it about rain and breathing...?
Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 5/29/2002
Wow, another wonderful poem! It just has that "rainy" feel, which is what I suppose you were going for. Lovely!
unexpected source chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
aw, la pluie looked so lovely.. as always, but strikingly particular,

and aw.

thats just so strikingly particular i cant,

its lovely.

how to write a review on such a poem!

i need some sort of Greek god by me, or some sort

of misted nymph academic classic romantic painting to post,

or maybe some unfamous symphony or movement.


some distinct lady of water

to describe such a poem

(doesnt make sense sorry)