Reviews for It Was Really Mysterious
DM3 chapter 1 . 12/13/2000
This work shows promise, but you should really proofread your stories before you submit them. Also, it seems like you began this story in the middle. You should have started with Jane receiving the note and then describe what happens, before you have the dialogue with her brother.
gmb chapter 1 . 10/19/2000
Very interesting plot. Though it seems to be in the middle, no beginning. Oh well. Good work. You've got the makings of a writer yet:) Please write more. Thanks.