|Reviews for The Last Journey
| AVIGON chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
Interesting how you structured the poem. I think the wording itself could use a bit more differentiation, but it's not been an experiment in vain, I can tell you that.
| Innocent Passerby chapter 1 . 2/11/2003
This has got to be my favorite of your poems.
It paints a picture, though not by any means a solid one. And wonderful words aside, breaking out of the rhymes you usually use was a great idea in this case. It suits the story nicely.
The thing I regret reading though, is that you haven't updated since this one. I know it's most likely been too long (aproaching a year) but I'm foolishly hoping that you might post something again.
So, if you do read this, keep in mind that atleast one person will be keeping an eye out for anything new, should you write again.
| Shadowgirl chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
I really like the first four lines. The words in italics are a nice touch. Nice job!