Reviews for What It Feels Like For The Heart To Die.
these kids chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
that was AWESOME! you started out from the veiw of the heartbreaker and switched to the perspective of the heartbroken. I really liked it. I could picture every little detail as if it were a movie in front of my eyes instead of words. Your rhyming wasn't consistent, but when you did use it, it made the stanze more powerful and effective. keep writing :)
Lisa Robinson chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
Aww wow. That was really great. A different concept then most poems out there. Excellent Job!
Jyouchan chapter 1 . 6/2/2002
This is why it's better to just not feel anything like that. If one sincerely believes that love is a game, or that love doesn't exist, then one cannot be hurt in the end.
Jyouchan chapter 1 . 6/2/2002
This is why it's better to just not feel anything like that. If one sincerely believes that love is a game, or that love doesn't exist, then one cannot be hurt in the end.
Alexandria1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
Yet another good poem.. you really know how to capture your feelings!
blake8 chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
thats a great view... I wish that the players and users would have the same thing happen to them. Maybe then they would understand.
Kiriko chapter 1 . 5/25/2002
Cool...
Hell's Huntress chapter 1 . 4/17/2002
Whoa...pretty good. I like it.