Reviews for If I Could Be. . .
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Lovely!However this section:

you know me inyou drag me out

Might have been a bit better worded. Perhaps the word 'draw' instead of 'know'...Not too sure about the choice of using 'drag' either. Push, perhaps? Hm...I don't really know. Just a suggestion. Overall, I love these lyrics. Nicely done.
Angelic-kat chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Wow. good poem/song. I especially like the start of it. It is very good!
Lunarian chapter 1 . 4/26/2002

Yay, you reviewed my Digi Prologue! Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou.

I thought I was familiar with most commonly used japanese expressions, but what does Yamenai mean please?


Ahhh your scaring me. And not in the way one may think. That was deep, really deep. And it scares me that I really didn't get much out of it. Scary because I have a poetry class next semester, If I can't start reading into these things I might be in a spot of trouble.

Sorry I can't give a very good review, poetry just isn't my thing, at least I think so. As far as I know. But what I could see was it was good, I liked it.


Ja ne