Reviews for If I Could Be. . .
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Lovely!However this section:

you know me inyou drag me out

Might have been a bit better worded. Perhaps the word 'draw' instead of 'know'...Not too sure about the choice of using 'drag' either. Push, perhaps? Hm...I don't really know. Just a suggestion. Overall, I love these lyrics. Nicely done.
Angelic-kat chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Wow. good poem/song. I especially like the start of it. It is very good!
Lunarian chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
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Yay, you reviewed my Digi Prologue! Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou.

I thought I was familiar with most commonly used japanese expressions, but what does Yamenai mean please?

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Ahhh your scaring me. And not in the way one may think. That was deep, really deep. And it scares me that I really didn't get much out of it. Scary because I have a poetry class next semester, If I can't start reading into these things I might be in a spot of trouble.

Sorry I can't give a very good review, poetry just isn't my thing, at least I think so. As far as I know. But what I could see was it was good, I liked it.

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Ja ne

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