Reviews for What started out as an ordinary day
lenaleelover13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
i really think u should edit this; the spelling isnt that great and punctuation is a little off. also, some parts were unclear, but others are perfect. i dont blame u for anything; this is ur 1st story, so... i understand.
SoyBean chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Weird. How could you write this when you were TEN?

Like i said...Weird. AND I LOVE IT! i can't believe that the chapter ended!

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ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
very nice story!
Rose Black chapter 1 . 1/13/2001
Ummmmmmmmmmm, thats really wierd. At first I thought Molly was the car. All I can is... ummmm... wierd.
JStalin 5 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Nice job! Oh and say hi to Mussolini for me! Sieg heil!