I like how you made it into a well played out story, even if they didn't get back together. I kinda prefer it that way.

-Ramen

Oh, very bittersweet. I love all your discription, but for a fic this short it is a little too much, perhaps. Of course, if you can make more plot instead of less description, that's always a lot better... :) Maybe you could even do something from his point of view before and after he talks to her, but I don't know if that would work or not. But anyway, love your description, I actually had a picture in my head, which is VERY unusual for me, believe me.

wow. very beautiful writing...

I hope that this didn't happen to you. I liked it, but not enough to wish this on you or anybody. I love your descriptive words. I could picture it so well.

awe that was sad. _ but I liked it. *smiles slightly* I haven't taken the time to read much originals lately but I'm glad I took the time to read this one. _~ I enjoyed it. *smiles*

I was hoping that you might do me the honr of allowing me to host it on the TOL (The Original's Library), I'll be working on that update after I finished the one I'm working on now I hope. Anyway it won't be accessible this weekend since geo is running some kind of mantiance but yeah. Anyway it'll be up after that heres the link. _~ ficup/orginal_

thanks for your time

Jaya

wow. i'd never get that from a guy. they fear me. i usually torture them a bit... but this is sooooooo so cool.

This is really beautiful. Eileen is so pure, and honest...I like her. This is an absolutely fantastic essay. You'd better have gotten a good mark for it!

I am not one to read or write realistic stuff but i got to tell you that was pretty good. Kind of makes me think about relationships in a different way...you know. You should put up more original work, because i like it!

Wow, this is amazing. youre descriptions of surroundings and characters actually made me feel as if i was there! you wanted critism? I cant actually find anything to critise, youre spelling is great and so is the actual content!

I must be beginning to sound like a god damn teacher! Sorry! Well i loved it, please tell what grade/ mark you got for it, coz it is really quite brill!

thats supers sad, but its really very good!

Aww, so sad!

*giggles* Did you get a good grade?

Cheer up, get well, drink be merry ... you get it.

AJ! that was sooo nice! i loved it and read it twice!

I like it alot, true story by any chance? if not u really captured the emotions and scenes involved as if it were.

Good job, as always, I really can't find much to criticize.

~Dragon

wow, sad angsty, very heavy and DARK! but it was great and good nd so very true. I like it.

well AJ this is good, real good.

You have a real gift at catching people's emosions and writing them down, I hope you got or get a good mark for it

Frodo aka Lauren