scary poor guys Update pleasse

Omg this story is so awesome! I like the whole battle they are going through good story! -

Blahdy blah... good story... read later... needs sleep.*loud snore*

Omg guess what? I think Monty likes Caleb. Har har har! I think he does. Well it seems you have a case of writer's block but hey - I'm only assuming and 99.99% of the time my assumptions are incorrect (and for your sake, it better be wrong this time to *cracks knuckles*). Please, I - I just don't know how to put it down in words, how much I want you to continue this story. I-I just... *sigh*

*new approach* Please...*bottom lip trembles* Pretty pretty please...*big puppy dog eyes water* Anyhow! My favorite character.. most likely Gabe cause he's the coolest (uke?)...Or maybe I like Monty - well if Monty likes Caleb afterall then I will most definitely like Monty. It's just the way my mind works. I'm a twisted like freak, this I know. Wow, Caleb's gramma is ... strange. Hey hey! Gabe's mother brought back my muse (as did the Scary Movie 3 commercial I just saw)!

Okay! YOU CAN JUST SKIP THAT RETARDED PARAGRAPH! NOW WHAT MATTERS IS THAT YOU GET THIS DOGGONE STORY UPDATED BEFORE I START SLAPPIN' BABIES AND OLD PEOPLE! AND ALSO THE FACT THAT I LOVE THIS STORY ALOT! ITS SO COOL MAN! WRITE MORE PLEASE!

Are you ever gonna finish this story? I really like it, please do!

o. only read the first chapter and part of the second one - characters seem cool, and am now wondering about anarchy and neo-goths, since i don't know much about either thing... (except that anarchy has something to do with chaos and everyone governing themselves..? i may be wrong...) well. the story's quite unique, i think... and i like it

i really like this story, well ritten and monty's anger is an interesting plot twist~

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Wow.

Can I say wow?

Then, wow.

This story was written honestly and clearly. I really enjoyed reading. One thing that really struck me about the story was that it wasn't puke-inducingly superfluous, like a lot of the other stories I've seen. Your grammar and spelling is perfect, and you've really put the time into your story.

Great job.

We! I love Caled and Gabe, they're so cool! I feel sorry for Monty though... hehe. I'm looking forward to an update.

Good chapter!

Really interesiting!

Great fic!

Keep writing!

:D

Please continue! Please please please! damn it...I'm hyper...lol _ yeah...anyway contine please? lol

UPDATE! Please? This is great! Finish it! Please?

*hands out gingerbread to DP* Yummy gingerbread for a great author!

On the subject of the two flames you have recieved, I have one thing to say. This is it: !

*wipes tears from her eyes* That is so funny! Their intelligence together seems to be ALMOST enough to fit in atom, though there are still a few units missing! It seems that proffesional flamers can't even flame halfway intelligently!

*breaks into crazy laughter again*

Monty needs to get the anvil out of his ass. Stupid prick. I cant believe someone like him would be phobic. I find my distaste for hm growing at an alarming rate. He's the kind of person I'd A)ignor or B)verbally beat the shit out if.

Gabe is just adorible. I hope he doesnt hurt me for saying that, but he is. He's proud of himself, he doent care what the world thinks, all in all, he's the knid of person I'd hang out with. And he sounds sexy.

Caleb...is a mystery. Sure, he doesnt care what the world thinks or anything, but he still hides things from it. Thats very stupid of him, cause if e didnt care, then why would he hide? HM? I still like him though.

By the by, closets make me clausterpkobic too, Gabes not the only one. _

OH! This is so interesting. Do you plan on updating any time soon? Zhai'helleva.

~Tris