You... must... write... faster! LOL, we're in the same boat... since I write slowly too, but... This is one that I'M reading so it must go fast bwahaha...ha... Anyway, I've still loving this story, but I need more. The one thing that irks me about it though is the fact that the one kids name is Gabe... grr, this was this fat kid that stalked me in the 6th grade named Gabe... LOL. :) Anyway, keep on rockin!

I just found this story when I was looking to see if you updated your Weiss Fic {I forget the name right now X.x} I'm glad I found it _ It's really good and I hope you can continue soon this is too good to have sit for long.

~Kobura and Jestrix

You have an intresting plot true, but all your characters are described so much like sterotypes. Basically all you characters sound like the lil Hot Topic kids. I mean, in the perfect vision of a goth girl? How can one have a perfect vision of a goth girl? Unless of couse, it's sterotypical. So that's my own input on this story.

YaYs! Finally! I'm so glad that you got a new part out, took damn long enough too! I love this story, it shows different aspects of life, like how even your best friend can betray you, plesae please get the next part out sooner!

Still very interesting. I like it a lot. Keep writing.~CT

hey, thanks so much for another chapter! now im glad i emailed you about it. _ so...whens the next chapter coming out?...lol. bai, meg

I like these people, really I do. So... real... Caleb and Gabe make me think of some of my friends. Honestly, this is great. Naother chapter soon? Please?

how did i miss this? It's great! Much more in depth then a lot of other stories on here these days. This is so excellent. It almost reminds me of one of my stories...ok, they're not that similar, but oh well...good job!

Oh! I love this so far... It's funny cuz I know someone who looks like the way you described Caleb. So yea i wanna read more.

hey. I for one think it's pretty good-and I'm the pettiest bitch on the block. But I love slash. so. there you go. I was just wondering...this prominent usage of the words "goth" and "anarchist"-not as in "the perfect image of a goth girl" but as in "the goth laughed" and "the anarchist replied"...is it a rebellious gesture against the ba-bas with the reviews? because if it is, couldn't you do without it? and if it's not, could you tell me or what it IS? thanks

finish you're story confuse me but i still like it so FINISH IT!

I thik... this is ok

A very, very good story. I don't see why anyone wanted to flame this, it's well written. So when'll the next chapter be coming out?~CT

Yay! You updated at last! _ *Huggles* Damn.. I've never used that word before.. Oh well. I thought it was FANTABULOUS!

Oh wow, this is a short but great chapter. *wipes a tear* I feel so bad for caleb. I'm so glad you updated, I love this story! Very poignant and stunning, you are a fantastic writer. Your characters kick ass!