Reviews for Another Child
Demeter Rose chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
This is excellent. I wasn't sure how Sam was related to Josh until well over halfway through the story and that was somewhat confusing, but this is really great.
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
That was so sad... The little details of their past life, like that chain in the door added to the sadness of the story.

The poem was painfully beautiful.

And now I'm crying...
Hypatia chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
This is really nice. I liked the feel of it and the way the characters were developed. This moved nicely and I enjoyed the hope that was given at the end of the angst. Good job.
Strider Hunter chapter 1 . 5/23/2002
Wow, Dee. Wow...that was a stunning story, and I am rarely taken aback by a story. Brief, poignant, but packed with emotion...I could FEEL that sick feeling that Sam had, alone in her apartment like that. And the poetry was very heartfelt, did you write those verses yourself?

Very, very well done...it is now one of my favorites.

Strider
Shoshie chapter 1 . 5/1/2002
*huggles DE* You are soooo talanted. Umm...you wanted cc, but I can't think of too much to change. It was clear, which is hard to do in an angst like this. The poem didn't flow as well as it could have. But that's just minor.
Ruby chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
It's good. Very good. ::noddles:: Because I edited.
Ca Rinoa Toki Moro Lockheart chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
;.; x 1000000000000000000! I cried too! *sniffles* Possitively beautiful!