|Reviews for Now She's Gone|
| poprox chapter 1 . 6/1/2002
that was so sad...it has good rhyming though, and i hope you never ever have to feel regret like the regret expressed in your poem
| Phaere chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
That was really good, you didn't promise too much (as always). I myself am not too keen on writing about subjects like drugs, abuse or suicide... I guess I just lack imagination. Anyways, continue and keep going with the good stuff! -Shazirah
| Quacking Waterfowl chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
and thus ends another sory of drunken abuse. that was to damn good keep up the work
| Ax chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
omg, cat, that is really sad... the rhyming is very good though, and i loved the word choice and sentence structure. it was a very good poem. so sad though...
| Stephen chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
it was good. Maybe you should write a book like this. So is the narrator a friend? is he/she you? Is he/she a boyfriend or a close close female friend of Jenny's?
Either way, it's good. keep it up.
| antonette chapter 1 . 4/24/2002
see! i knew it was ur fault! kidding. damn, that was good...
| Tessalinn chapter 1 . 4/23/2002
OMG! I liked that! very... i dunno... deep! really kewl and i liked the way you ended it "now she's gone" hehe... good job!