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![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... i get it, but its really difficult to explain, and that is what makes a poem great... the reader gets it, but only YOUR words can make him understand.. good job, btw, a new poem by me is up- "I am the Universe" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, groovy! Veeery... unique! Or, as my mom would say, "Yoony-Kue". Don't ask. Er, yeah... I liked this! Metaphorical I'm asuming, very cool. ~Bobbs head~ He's a cold hearted snake! AH! Look into his eyes. Uh-oh, he's been tellin' lies! He's a lover-boy at play... OH he don't play by rules, uuutoooh... uh-oh, girl don't be the fool now. Yes, this IS a hyper review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful poem. Wanting to become the person you feel you should be, but fearing you will run out of time before you get there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oo... Good poem. I'm not sure if I get it or not but I think I might. Oh and the "Laughing stars" poem was about someone looking up at the stars remembering all the times people laughed at her. I figured that out about a week ago. I'm so proud. Hehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, your 'wind' poem you showed me today is kinda like this one but different. anyhoo i'm bored, and u know i like all your poems. oh, i mean 'stories'. BWAHAHAHHAeeeeeeeeeeee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Great poem wouldnt we all like to find our selves hey why would u like to be half yourself time seems ssssoooooo long sometimes! I hope u arnt' hurting ttul bye bye waterprincess |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good. I like this. Keep writing |