That was beautifully romantic. Great job.

This was unbearably romantic, and passionate. I'm glad you are so inspired. _*

AAH! this is so great, I love it. -Jay-

Nice...very upbeat and has a good feeling to it. This one didn't make me cry like your 'Broken Glass' story. ;)

luv it Angel! very cute!

this is my absolute favorite poem i have ever read. i am honored to think that i played a part in this poem. it is you to a "T" angel.. you are one of the most poetic people i know.. and though you have heard this from me before... i am soo proud of you

No reason to be gentle. Wonderful writing. Great imagery. I was able to picture the scene while I read it.

Oh, how sappy at the beginning and angsty at the end. Incredible. So movie like - the meeting, the leaving. *g* Why'd you seperate? :(

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