Reviews for then she died
Zekk Karst chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
Ouch. That hits home. I like the 3rd & 4th lines...as well as the last two. This poem's heavy with meaning. Good job!
The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
Hmmm...I think I already reviewed this one..._
Keriana Williams chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
So sad! ::Sniffsniff:: Sounds like something I would write -;; Very true tho
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/19/2002
It seems like this girl was cutting herself. This piece was very nicely done and I solute you. A lot of ppl are like that, and behind everyone's back, the one's who care the most, they die. It's really sad. I like it. Its so true and yet so horibly true that it shouldn't be. I hope that make sense to you, cuz it doesn't to me.
Miss Spinn chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
That is very strong. I like the last two lines, they seem so real.
Keron chapter 1 . 5/25/2002
This is beautiful, though I would have liked more description... the last two lines are thought-provoking and like a sudden bolt from the blue... wakes one up immediately. I can't believe I didn't review this before!
bLoOdYhAnDs chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
wow.. i especially lyk the last 2 lines and for every tear she never shed/ a drop of blood was being bled.. very strong
Arbobug2 chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
Awesome!

keep up the good work! you are a very good writer, keeep typing!
Red Rose Petals chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
OMG! This is so deep! It's so sad but so very beautiful! *tear*
Lisa Robinson chapter 1 . 4/25/2002
Whoa. That was really really good.