|Reviews for The Ocean Countly Library From Across The Street|
| Stemwinder chapter 1 . 5/4/2002
This was definitly interesting. I've never seen line breaks quite like that before (I've tried to do somthing similiar in the past, and never quite accomplished it!) Actually, I stumbled across your page quite by accident, saw over 200 poems, and thought "NEver be able to read them all!" But, as a fellow New Jerseian (Born and raised, now transplanted in Florida) I thought, "well, let's see" and the title of this one just jumped at me. From what I've read so far, I can say you definitly have talent. Keep writing and posting, and I'll try to read more!
Heather, AKA Stemwinder
| ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
The ending leaves you kind of wondering what the author was really going to say. The fragmented lines make for some kind of poetic insanity. Love it, as always.
| Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 4/25/2002
Superb work! I could never write something like this. I especially liked-
"You how like
Yeats I return to
Perception of Yeats
Different from the
The way you manipulated the broken lines was so clever that it belonged there. I'm looking forward to read even more when I have the time (no hope of finishing the other 175 soon :) ) . Truly great!
Thanks for your support! Your compliments are too worthy for me.