i liked really flows. near the end it started to get to were i didn't think it fit, but i liked it in there. i liked the whole thing

Nice

I ramble too. :) It's cute...blunt...*evil*...or whatever you want to call it. I like it. :)

-ali

i think i reviewed this already, but who cares. its soo good it deserves 2 reviews. im gonna write one kinda like that too. tell ya when its posted

! that was great . ur almost as good as me (wink wink) lol . i really liked it tho im gonna print it out cuz its funny and good and all that shit u should write like that more often