wow! i really like this you should write more like it!

This is a very chilling poem. Your ryhmes are excelent and you still manage to make sense. I especially like the lines 'Darkness overshadowing the light
Wanting to give up on the eternal fight
Trying to get away from the pain and sorrow
Thinking there might not be a tomorrow' I can really relate to this part. Great work, write more soon. I'm going to put you on my author alert list.
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Wow this is pretty Gloomy! Well, I liked it a lot! Keep up your Excellent work!

you're really good at ryhming while still making it make sense and i really respect that keep up the poetry

OMG, that is good! scary thought though! returning the favor! Thanks for reviewing, my poem! Good luck in writing!

Brilliant poem, you're excellent at writing.

That *is* dark. Very dark. *shudders* That doesn't mean I don't like it-cause I do! Good poem!

Wonderful and dark. :)

It has a chill to it that makes it seem real, and my throat tightens up just like the one in the poem. I think it's a brilliant piece _ Thank you for sharing it.